Name: Joanna Czurlowska Age: 17 Front Cover The front cover is very simple however it looks really neat and organized. I also like the way you have used the picture and that it is black and white. I also like the colour of the masthead but I would recommend you to put there a main cover line so the cover gives more information before it is purchased. Contents Page I like the structure of this page however I think the bottom of it is to empty. You should add more text on this page so it will be more interesting. Double Page Spread I like the way you have used the pictures. The only thing that does not look very good is the text. The font is too small and I am not able to read it. The red text is also too big so maybe if you make that text smaller and make the font of the article bigger then it may look better. Also when you fold that page as it is now, it won't look very attractive. As I am one of the potential buyers I would be in interested to buy this magazine as it appeals to my age group.
In my opinion, the front cover photo is very well chosen and edited. Although, the front cover has no information about what the magazine includes and if the front cover is not appealing to the audience then the audience is not going to buy it. The way you've organised, the colours and house style are very good because they fit into the Pop & Soul genre. The Contents page is rather too simple, it needs changes because if the contents page is not as attractive as the rest of the pages the audience you're aiming for is not going to be interested on what the magazine contents. The double page spread isn't very well organised, because the text on the left side of the reader is bigger than the one on its right side; that shouldn't be relevant but considering your audience it should be more organised and neat. However, i like the fact that you've used a lot of pictures which make the pages stand out better from the rest of the magazine. Jhully A. Marangoni 16 years old.
-I like the house style of all three pages. -It feels that the front cover looks more like a poster, than a front cover of a music magazine. -Include cover lines on the front cover to show whats included in the magazine. -I like the front cover because its neat and organised but it seems very simple. -The contents page includes minimum text which makes it seem that it isn't a contents page, once again it looks more like a poster. -The same house style of the front cover and contents page represents the age and gender your aiming for. -The double page spread looks tacky and messy as theres a large image, and the article is in a small font. Once again, making it seem that it is more of a poster than a magazine article page. Amina Adan- 16years old.
I like the look of it , it has a very professional look and the colour scheme matches the singer. you have used the make well for affect. The only thing i dont like is it is very blank you have just added a title and a main picture. you should add more features.
Contents Page I like the way you have stuck to the same colour scheme the size of the image and how you have put the picture was done very well.
I think you should add more as it is the contents page so you need to inform the audience where everything is, if you do this i guarantee you could get an A
Double Page Spread I like the house style and the structure it is very professional and very different. The fonts you have used are very good.
I think you need to add more just like your over two pieces they are very empty and not enough features.
The front cover; It looks very good but however it doenst look much of a front cover but it does look unique but it feel as that it the free poster. It looks very blank I think you couldve added the coverlines and selling lines.
Contents page: I like the house style which stands out and the fonts but i dont think it stands out i think you should add a background rather than the front cover.
Double page spread: I think you could change the font color and the background color which can make it stand out more. But i like the way your layout is structured.
Name: Joanna Czurlowska
ReplyDeleteAge: 17
Front Cover
The front cover is very simple however it looks really neat and organized. I also like the way you have used the picture and that it is black and white. I also like the colour of the masthead but I would recommend you to put there a main cover line so the cover gives more information before it is purchased.
Contents Page
I like the structure of this page however I think the bottom of it is to empty. You should add more text on this page so it will be more interesting.
Double Page Spread
I like the way you have used the pictures. The only thing that does not look very good is the text. The font is too small and I am not able to read it. The red text is also too big so maybe if you make that text smaller and make the font of the article bigger then it may look better. Also when you fold that page as it is now, it won't look very attractive.
As I am one of the potential buyers I would be in interested to buy this magazine as it appeals to my age group.
In my opinion, the front cover photo is very well chosen and edited. Although, the front cover has no information about what the magazine includes and if the front cover is not appealing to the audience then the audience is not going to buy it. The way you've organised, the colours and house style are very good because they fit into the Pop & Soul genre.
ReplyDeleteThe Contents page is rather too simple, it needs changes because if the contents page is not as attractive as the rest of the pages the audience you're aiming for is not going to be interested on what the magazine contents.
The double page spread isn't very well organised, because the text on the left side of the reader is bigger than the one on its right side; that shouldn't be relevant but considering your audience it should be more organised and neat. However, i like the fact that you've used a lot of pictures which make the pages stand out better from the rest of the magazine.
Jhully A. Marangoni 16 years old.
-I like the house style of all three pages.
ReplyDelete-It feels that the front cover looks more like a poster, than a front cover of a music magazine.
-Include cover lines on the front cover to show whats included in the magazine.
-I like the front cover because its neat and organised but it seems very simple.
-The contents page includes minimum text which makes it seem that it isn't a contents page, once again it looks more like a poster.
-The same house style of the front cover and contents page represents the age and gender your aiming for.
-The double page spread looks tacky and messy as theres a large image, and the article is in a small font. Once again, making it seem that it is more of a poster than a magazine article page.
Amina Adan- 16years old.
Front page
ReplyDeleteI like the look of it , it has a very professional look and the colour scheme matches the singer. you have used the make well for affect.
The only thing i dont like is it is very blank you have just added a title and a main picture. you should add more features.
Contents Page
I like the way you have stuck to the same colour scheme the size of the image and how you have put the picture was done very well.
I think you should add more as it is the contents page so you need to inform the audience where everything is, if you do this i guarantee you could get an A
Double Page Spread
I like the house style and the structure it is very professional and very different. The fonts you have used are very good.
I think you need to add more just like your over two pieces they are very empty and not enough features.
The front cover; It looks very good but however it doenst look much of a front cover but it does look unique but it feel as that it the free poster. It looks very blank I think you couldve added the coverlines and selling lines.
ReplyDeleteContents page: I like the house style which stands out and the fonts but i dont think it stands out i think you should add a background rather than the front cover.
Double page spread: I think you could change the font color and the background color which can make it stand out more. But i like the way your layout is structured.